Maya+Pandhi

Maya Pandhi: Basic Info: -One of the soccer players of the Tangerine Middle School co-ed team. -One of the top soccer players in the county. Other information: she is very athletic for a girl and is also very good in soccer and as being a striker.*does not give educational background or bad traits from the book. Good traits: -very good at playing soccer/ striker -one of the most athletic female player in the whole county(based on the book)

comments: - poor characterization - not evident traits given and no justification - lacks examples and discussion - no explanation given why Maya should win the MOS award

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